Rewrite retrospective essay.  Some comments my professor said for this essay: Pa

WRITE MY ESSAY

Rewrite retrospective essay. 
Some comments my professor said for this essay:
Pa

Rewrite retrospective essay. 
Some comments my professor said for this essay:
Paragraphing needs work! Consider where breaks should go to move along time or action within your essay. 
More character development (sensory detail) is needed to bring the people in this story to life.
Consider where you can condense material. Weed out excessive wording, unnecessary prepositional phrases.
Citations need fixing. 
Works Cited list is not formatted correctly. Please see Hacker for specific instructions relating to the type of source used.
Rewrite, maybe use a different citation example, change point of view, just rewrite it.

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