I got my Submission Feedback from my professor and I want you to fix it. Here is

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I got my Submission Feedback from my professor and I want you to fix it.
Here is the Overall Feedback:
Dear Marvin, your first source is the review of a college production and that does not count as a valid scholastic source material. Please consider revising it. Please also consider citing all the material that you may have been using for this submission. The conclusion in particular seems to match with a lot of internet sources. I recommend a full revision to avoid any inadvertent copyright infringement. 
attached with filename (Deconstructed Essay-2) is the original prompt for this assignment.
Attached with filename( Komala Deconstructed Draft) is the worked on assignment that needs to be fixed.
Lastly, I also attached the Thanksgiving Play reading itself as reference

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