Please edit my paper “Assignment B”  i got a B-  for the draft . Professor said

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Please edit my paper “Assignment B” 
i got a B-  for the draft . Professor said

Please edit my paper “Assignment B” 
i got a B-  for the draft . Professor said : Overall Feedback
Fairly good effort to start with. Remember to review the requirements very carefully, as the concepts of climate change are very weak in the submission. How are you using the budget and explaining the impact of climate change based on the resources provided. Use the excel sheets provided to develop the financial plan. 
General Feedback from professor to whole class  :Please note that your first stage is reviewed and graded. These are your preliminary grades, and they will be changed once the final submission is made. All changes must be in YELLOW highlight. Some comments have been given. Most of the submissions have been attempted fairly well. Some of the general weaknesses are the lack of data, and proper use of the excel sheets. Many of the statements require validation by use of in-text citations and data. Additionally, some submissions have high use of AI. That must be fixed before the final submission. Use the textbook to build your principles in submission. 

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