Corrections that need to be made are from the professor: For a revision, you mus

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Corrections that need to be made are from the professor:
For a revision, you mus

Corrections that need to be made are from the professor:
For a revision, you must complete the following:
Make significant changes to organization, content or MLA documentation in response to my notes and comments. 
Highlight the changes
1) You don’t need to number paragraphs anymore in in-text citations. Your thesis only lists two solutions, but you bring up three, so that needs to match. Since linking to primary care is your favorite, change the thesis and body paragraph order so that it appears last. The community services one is pretty vague, so it probably should be first and you need a model or specific community program to make that clear to the reader. Most of this is moving things around and making a few changes.
2) Cut the last paragraph and use the one before it as your conclusion.

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